Fortunate I am to have seen that pristine beauty once,
If only once in my life
Your words made me come alive
And I adored your very sight
Like a luminous sylph in the night
You brought me light,
You gave me light
When you came, arrived a new dawn
But then you left - a long eclipse
And then you came again, my love
My life then shined evermore
Such brightness occurred never before
Never again
Fortunate I am to have seen that pristine beauty once,
If only once in my life
6 comments:
Hey- by your own admission-you have seen that pristine beauty twice! :)
nice of u to point it..what i actually meant was that experience with pristine beauty happened once in life (of course with a bit of up and down)..but that coming, going away and coming back should be interpreted as one experience...if that doesnt convince u, well its just an exercise of poetic license then :P
lovely!
thanks buddy :)
You brought me light,
You gave me light
???
repetition of thought!
no not at all
the first is the to the external...the second is the internal or internalizing it
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